4th grade narrative essays

How I scraped by elbow by riding a flicker

By Akimi

I went to a park with my mom and my friend Ian was going to be there to, we were going to ride our scooters around the park. When we arrived Ian and his mom are already there, so we went in the park and we were going so fast on our scooters, and when we were going down a hill it was so fun!!!! When we went on it again I pulled the breaks too far and I slipped off my scooter and noticed a scratch on my elbow, when our moms went to where we were I showed my mom my scratch she poured water on my elbow to clean it. We started walking towards the parking lot and said bye to Ian and his mom and we got into the car and left the park to go home.